Sexism is
the principal and the most violent social issue in this society and particularly
in this country.
The negative differences derived of the
separation on duopoly genders conform in my opinion, the most important form of
inequality because, gender roles have repercussions in all aspects of our life for
being the most archaic form of separation between human beings, and the
historical overlaying of the masculine gender over the feminine one seem to increase
over the years. For example, in Chile,
the inequality between man and women are concrete: the access to education it’s
clearly less than what their male counterparts can opt for.
Sexism also affects the way the work is
distributed, we know that today the labor market is dominated largely by male
forces, according to OCDE studies, women has 23% less possibilities to find a
job compared to men and the quality of the jobs that are available for a large
number of women is quite precarious: the most of them are informal jobs,
half-days jobs or jobs with few social protection guarantees.
Continue with the focus on the differences in
the world of the job, the gender pay gap is terrifying, the average monthly
income for the men in Chile is $543.996 and for women $382.253, for
exactly the same job, the same is repeated independent of the level of the
studies analyzed. It’s almost naturalized that women should earn less because
they’re still considered as the second income of the family nuclei or because the mere fact of being
women.
In conclusion, the inequalities created by the
sexism seem not to have a close end. This social issue is the one that the most
deeper transform our society because it seem to be completely normalizaed by all of us.
ooh Cona! i'm agree with you opinion, the sexism deeply attack to our society, the discrimination only for be women is a problem in Chile, we won 30% less that a men making the same job!!, in addition our jobbing more because to that jobbing in the home in the work, we are harassed in the streets, in the school, in the university, in all places and the mostly terrible is normal! all is accepted! the discrimation, that the women was a sexual object and that you having that "fulfill with you obligation". This a problem, and EXIST, is real it isn't a invention or creation is real and happen all the days and all day, in all place.
ResponderEliminarMuch feminist love for you <3
TS: Sexism is the principal and the most violent social issue in this society and particularly in this country.
ResponderEliminarSS1:The negative differences derived [of] FROM the separation [on duopoly I THINK YOU CAN USE THIS WORD IN ECONOMICS AND POLITICS, I AM NOT SURE IF IT APPLIES HERE] INTO TWO genders [conform] in my opinion, the most important form of inequality because, gender roles have repercussions in all aspects of our life for being the most archaic form of separation between human beings, and the historical overlaying of the masculine gender over the feminine one seem to increase over the years.(THIS SUPPORTING SENTENCE IS RATHER LONG, DON'T YOU THINK?)
EX: For example, in Chile, the inequality between man and women [are] IS concrete: the access to education FOR WOMEN? [it’s] IS clearly less than what their male counterparts can opt for.
SS2: Sexism also affects the way [the] work is distributed,
EXP:we know that today the labor market is dominated largely by male forces, according to OCDE studies, women [has] HAVE 23% less possibilities to find a job compared to men and the quality of the jobs that are available for a large number of women is quite precarious: the most of them are informal jobs, half-days jobs or jobs with few social protection guarantees.
SS3: ContinuING[e] with the focus on the differences in the world of [the job] WORK, the gender pay gap is terrifying,
EXP:the average monthly income for the men in Chile is $543.996 and for women $382.253, for exactly the same job, the same is repeated independentLY of the level of the studies analyzed. It’s almost naturalized that women should earn less because they’re still considered as the second income of the family nuclei or because OF the mere fact of being women.
C: In conclusion, the inequalities created by the sexism seem not to have a close end. This social issue is the one that the most deeper transform our society because it seem to be completely normalizaed by all of us.
OK Constanza, if you could just outline the paragraph structure a bit more clearly.