My last vacation in mid-February this year were very very special, because they were not planned, we created an itinerary as we went along and all the trip was full of experiences and adventures. Also we met beautiful places in southern Chile and discovered great food and good people
It was unexpected, from one day to another we decided go to the south of Chile to the region of Araucanía, didn’t have much money but we wanted so badly to know new places so we went anyway.
We lived a lot of funny adventures, part of our trip we make hitch-hiking on the way to Villarrica. Camped in the Huerquehue National Park and did the tour of the various paths, despite the rain falling, we could see small waterfalls, lagoons in height and unique flora and fauna. In addition, people we meet in our stay in the park was very friendly, shared supplies whit them and ate together near the fire to pass the cold. Some of them were foreigners, Argentinians and Brazilians so we had many stories to tell them and to tell us.
We also visited various places near Temuco, the network inter-lakes: Pucon, Caburgua and Lican Ray, where we swam despite the icy waters. The rainiest days were spent at home by the fireplace or in the hot springs near Pucón, where we stayed most of the time. The best of all was the food, we went to countless restaurants from many places and we tried everything we could think of, but upon returning from vacation we regretted a little :(
Undoubtedly, the most special holidays I ever had, with a million of new experiences, people and places, although much remains to live yet!
Nice post , Cona! I really liked it. Southern Chile is a wonderfull place to go on holidays, I would go there again.
ResponderEliminarWhen you put "did the tour of the various paths", I don't really know if that is a correct expresion, may be could be "did tours to many places" or "we went over many paths"
Cheers!!! :D
pd, your post is so guay. I marked it on the gap :d
Great holidays Constanza. Nice post, good structure but I had problems to understand some phrases (was my problem). Regards
ResponderEliminarhi! Coni <3 how are you? i liked you vacations, but i think that can describe more the places that you visited. Care for you <3
ResponderEliminarMy last vacation (SINGULAR) in mid-February this year were (PLURAL) very very special, TOPIC SENTENCE?
ResponderEliminar…Also we (met) DISCOVERED beautiful places in southern Chile and (discovered) great food and MET good people. TOPIC SENTENCE??
…, WE HITCHHIKED part of our trip (we make hitch-hiking) on the way to Villarrica. WE [C]camped in the Huerquehue National Park and (did the )tourED [of the] various paths,
…people we (meet) MET in our stay in the park (was) WERE!! very friendly, WE shared supplies [whit] WITH them and ate together near the fire to [pass] AVOID, DODGE the cold. Some of them were foreigners, Argentinians and Brazilians so we had many stories to tell them and to tell us. CONNECTORS??
… but upon returning from vacation we regretted IT a little :(
Undoubtedly, THESE WERE the most special holidays I ever had,
Your experience in the south seems to have been very nice, you could have narrated it in a much better way if you had followed the structure indicated in classes:
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Your ideas are attractive, you need to coordinate them in a better way with appropriate connectors (check material) and provide a conclusion marker.
You hardly used the notions required for this paragraph, unfortunately. Your editing was not the best, singular-plural problems; spelling “whit” instead of “with” is not acceptable.